3rd Quarter Submission Feedback

3rd Quarter Submission Feedback
The main thing my teacher and peers told me to edit is my second article page. Instead of using the ratings and review page, they suggested that I use all of the pictures to make a collage. I chose not to do this because it would cost more money to print a page full of color images. I also thought that keeping the ratings and reviews would benefit the customers more. 






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